c2011 Helen Reynolds
Lashes by Mary McCallum
The art of mascara isn’t hard to master. It just needs a firmness
of touch, and a wiggle before the brush leaves the lashes. I’ve applied it on
the run: on the toilet, eating breakfast, driving to work – one hand on the
steering wheel, one on the mascara wand, both eyes on the road. I swear, I’d only
look in the rear vision mirror once or twice to check I hadn’t missed anything.
That
last time was different. Something scratching – a dislodged lash? The mascara clogged
on the brush. I remember tipping the mirror and looking deep into the weeping
white of my eye.
The flash of yellow came out of nowhere. Tiny candy-pink tights cartwheeling. One shoe. On the bonnet, the daisy from the little yellow hat. That’s all I see now, and I refuse to frame it. I can’t. No more black plasticky lash-paint for me.
The flash of yellow came out of nowhere. Tiny candy-pink tights cartwheeling. One shoe. On the bonnet, the daisy from the little yellow hat. That’s all I see now, and I refuse to frame it. I can’t. No more black plasticky lash-paint for me.
Lashes,
only lashes.
8 comments:
look forward to seeing your new flash fiction - crossing fingers for the regional award!
Really like this :)
Good luck with your other piece.
Oh, I love the witty hint in the first line towards Elizabeth Bishop's poem 'One Art' - fabulous! The drawing is perfectly matched, too. Good luck with the regional award, Mary!
That's great, Mary. Love the opening line.
So pleased you got the Bishop nod, Elizabeth and janis! I gave a little squeal when I saw your comments just now. I'm really pleased with this story but sadly I'd posted it on my blog so couldn't enter it - gnash, it's the first time that's happened to me. Oh well...
It's always so interesting to see how words and images go together. In this case, such an excellent match! Really enjoyed this piece, Mary. Glad you have enjoyed the Flash Week here. We'll all be glad to hear the results of the national comp on Friday! :)
Clever to use frivolity as an introduction to tragedy. How quickly it came. The use of lashes in the last line is a powerful image too.
Great flash fiction and a lovely complementing illustration.
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