for Christina
Hell I believe is the carpark at Pak’nSave on a Saturday
the lost souls -
all those hunched and bunched and loaded up somewhere
between
the trolley lane and the sliding door
devils? too many
shrieking for off-cuts of luncheon from the deli counter
angels? one
appeared in front of me once slipping between the Odyssey
and a Corolla
on her way to the entrance (someone sounded a horn)
insouciant
in jeans and a velvet singlet and a flash - when she laughed –
a tongue stud
arms swinging unhurried and wide nothing in her hands but rings
no child
no wallet no cell phone not a damned thing
and a back so
straight and strong you knew it could without any
trouble
support a pair of wings
Mary McCallum
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2 comments:
Absolutely beautiful Mary. I love the structure - teh way you carry the meaning on beyond the end of the line!
Haven't had time to do TP myself this week due to work committments, but going to enjoy reading everyone else's.
My favourite Tuesday Poem this week! the looseness and fluidity made me fly over the words. And I agree with Rachel, stunning reversal of fortune.
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