tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post9191960644867727140..comments2023-10-22T23:29:48.012+13:00Comments on O Audacious Book: Tuesday Poem: Leaving by Andrew Johnston Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-88554977451222846332013-04-23T20:48:27.762+12:002013-04-23T20:48:27.762+12:00I love the opening lines - the image of 'a mad...I love the opening lines - the image of 'a madman brushing off<br />spiders'.Mary Macphersonhttp://www.marymacphoto.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-12850000482653180982013-04-23T09:02:03.766+12:002013-04-23T09:02:03.766+12:00Goodness, this is good. I love the opening lines o...Goodness, this is good. I love the opening lines of each part -- and thank you for the note about the taupata. I also love the simplicity of the lines --<br /><br />Your belongings --<br />as if you belonged to them --<br /><br />And that recurring wind. And that ending -- the puzzled sky, turning away. WOW. I really love this. Michelle Elvyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503119577895402738noreply@blogger.com