tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post6302928957035102266..comments2023-10-22T23:29:48.012+13:00Comments on O Audacious Book: Tuesday Poem: WildUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-73851355856921256182012-02-08T21:19:35.388+13:002012-02-08T21:19:35.388+13:00I really like this Mary. I like how image of the f...I really like this Mary. I like how image of the flock of birds is like a pumping, fluttering heart.Helen Rickerbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652318704387476082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-2310493360216730652012-02-08T20:52:03.711+13:002012-02-08T20:52:03.711+13:00Very sad. It's difficult to capture the essenc...Very sad. It's difficult to capture the essence of hurts so close but less is definitely more and you've written a poignant tribute.Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-63835038666205782712012-02-07T21:03:19.906+13:002012-02-07T21:03:19.906+13:00Yes, you managed to get all that into those few li...Yes, you managed to get all that into those few lines Mary. It's so full of energy, and there's a sad, elegiac feel to the last two lines. Lovely.Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-1423369627231332092012-02-07T05:04:40.834+13:002012-02-07T05:04:40.834+13:00The brevity makes this seem so powerful, so conden...The brevity makes this seem so powerful, so condensed, so full of life - 'erupting'. Thank you for sharing your poem and your dedication, Mary - amazing stuff, as always.Elizabeth Welshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15420253723750754324noreply@blogger.com