tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post3994899733342799761..comments2023-10-22T23:29:48.012+13:00Comments on O Audacious Book: Tuesday Poem: The StormUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-47208812422108930112013-08-31T13:50:08.209+12:002013-08-31T13:50:08.209+12:00I am enjoying "the blue". A great book.h...I am enjoying "the blue". A great book.however as a yachtie I cringe to read "shipping the oars" it does not mean throwing them in the bottom of the boat when you finish rowing. It means putting them in the rowlocks before rowing :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-90627832422863051052013-08-28T16:52:11.335+12:002013-08-28T16:52:11.335+12:00I like the way this flows. There are distinct rhyt...I like the way this flows. There are distinct rhythms here, and yet it portrays this idea of life 'in pieces' very well indeed. Interesting, the form you chose. I would have imagined it in broken sections and lines... this works well, however: the juxtaposing of the solid block of words, no interruptions, no spaces with the ideas in it. And that last little subtlety -- a little blue. Michelle Elvyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503119577895402738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-688274121226963086.post-22537628804199000652013-08-27T22:21:53.083+12:002013-08-27T22:21:53.083+12:00Lovely Mary! Hope everything is soon mended - I s...Lovely Mary! Hope everything is soon mended - I saw the pics and it looked awful.Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.com